The pitch email
Sent to the Forbes Advisor LLC formation editor (found via LinkedIn). 4-paragraph email. Paragraph 1: $WyomingLLC differentiator (price + specialization). Paragraph 2: real data we publish (Mercury approval rates by country, 800-application dataset). Paragraph 3: open-source handbook on GitHub. Paragraph 4: ask for inclusion criteria and what they would need to consider us.
What Forbes Advisor cares about
- Real differentiation: Not "we are also a good LLC service." Specific positioning vs the dominant brands.
- Customer track record: How many customers, retention, NPS-style data.
- Transparency: Pricing clarity, refund policy, customer reviews.
- Editorial integrity: They do not accept payment for inclusion. Pure editorial decision based on consumer value.
- Niche specialization: Forbes Advisor maintains "best for X" categories. Specializing wins inclusion in your niche.
Why it took 7 emails
Editor is busy. First email got auto-acknowledged but no reply. Second email 10 days later with one specific question. Third email with data attachment. Fourth email with handbook link. Fifth email confirming review timeline. Sixth email after their evaluation period. Seventh email post-inclusion thanking them.
Inclusion criteria they shared
- 500+ customers minimum (we had 1,200+ at pitch time)
- Transparent pricing (we listed every fee on one page)
- Customer reviews on third-party sites (we had Trustpilot reviews building)
- Specialized differentiation (we are non-resident-only)
- No predatory practices (no auto-renew traps, no hidden fees)
What it drove
- 5,000+ monthly referral visits from Forbes Advisor
- ~150 customers/month attributable to the article
- Higher conversion rate (Forbes-referred visitors convert at 2.5% vs site average 1.8%)
- Meaningful trust signal: "as featured in Forbes Advisor" on our homepage